Outspoken Nothingness

Saturday, July 23, 2005

My Shadow

A Black Hole
Never-ending Turmoil, pulling and sucking everything in
So dark my world
No light, no ending, no rebound
No hope, no reverie
Simply Despair

The longing, the desire, My foolish yearns
Never fulfilled
Never a touch of a hand, or an understanding nod
Never felt a beating heart

So lonely, so lonesome, and completely alone
Dejection, Depression, Desperation
Misery, my only loyal Friend
So cold, so helpless
So lost - aimlessly wandering

My Bleeding Heart
My Hollow soul
My feelings so numb and dead

My life, simply a Black Hole
I'm falling, so quickly, on my way down,
Slowly fading away into sheer Nothingness
Knocking so hard on Death's door
Shunned away by Life, not even Death is letting me in

I'm reaching out, I'm calling, I'm crying for Help
Only a touch of a hand
Only an understand nod
Only for a beating heart


  • Stanza by stanza and word by word, you brought me down into your anguish. Good writing.

    Although you may be writing about another person, defamiliarization of one's self is sometimes healthy and feeling self-pity is too. One's shadow can be the most difficult feat to overcome. We can be our own enemy as much as our own liberator.

    P.S. I have added your blog to my link list on my "Perpetuate" blog. I hope you don't mind.

    By Blogger TANTALIZE, at 26/7/05 5:01 PM  

  • Ofcourse I don't mind!
    Thanks! ;)
    I'm glad you liked it

    By Blogger dishevelled, at 28/7/05 5:16 PM  

  • Hey, I like the words, I don't know how to really describe it...but it does sound like it's coming from someone who is lonely, and it's one of the things I have a good deal of experience in. Good words from a good person.

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